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Un soare sarac, o luna in plus,
Inserare cu iz de-nceput.
Plecare de-acasa cu pranzul inclus,
Dorinti pamantesti - asternut.

Sentimentul ratarii, doi batrani salvatori,
Orator surdomut si timid.
Mesaj ne-nteles, la birt muncitori,
O moarte de preot lucid.

Dimineata si-un mai imbatat in destin,
Picior curajos, neatins.
Uitare mascata, benefic inchin,
Cadere placuta-n abis.

Razboi amabil imbracat vernil,
Europa rescrisa codat.
Trompeta mancata de carii de lux,
Cu zambetul frant, sacadat.

Promotii razand vitrinelor gri,
Cu premii in zambete - scoici.
O mare aflata-n impas centenar
Speriata ca nu mai apar.

Sunete tari de rebel prematur,
Rabdare, otel, canapea.
Esti prins in navod, nu vrei sa pierzi nimic,
Roscat incurcat - catifea.
20.05.2009
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feel-the-freedom Featured By Owner May 27, 2010
Cred ca eu sunt cea care trebuie sa iti multumeasca pentru doza de inspiratie, ce mi-a fost vitala in acele momente:clap: :floating: !
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SmokeStories Featured By Owner May 23, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
scrii superb. insa it isn't experimental poetry, check details of the sections.

PS. :iconangstywriters:?
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impuls Featured By Owner May 23, 2009
hm..da..e mai mult un experiment pentru mine, deocamdata. nu stiam daca e cazul sa le pun si aici, dar..au fost bine primite.
[de fapt..nu-mi prea place sa fac incadrari deobicei, ma fac sa ma simt ingradit:D]

in legatura cu angstywriters..nu stiu, o sa ma gandesc la asta si te anunt. stiu ca esti membrul fondator acolo. :)

btw, thank you :hug:
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SmokeStories Featured By Owner May 23, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem, the pleasure was on my side, I sometimes get this kind of moods when I'd critique even God.=P
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darkbylarissa Featured By Owner May 21, 2009  Student General Artist
cu asta m-ai dat gata.
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impuls Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
ma bucur. :D
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darkbylarissa Featured By Owner May 22, 2009  Student General Artist
:D
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exploded-soda Featured By Owner May 20, 2009   Photographer
mama mia :D
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